he ate the fruit
that is how the end began
in the beginning
and having
a spirit like his
it was not a punishment
it was a quiet statement
of self
of lack
of despair
thank you all for reading.
Monday, October 26, 2009
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That's a great one.
ReplyDeleteI am beginning to notice a certain efficiency to your writing. So few words yet packing a big punch.
thank you for your kind comment.
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