Sunday, October 25, 2009

you want a title too?!

when everything looks two dimensional
flat
to teeter
and fall
with a gust of wind
raising dust
revealing a cloudy horizon

but here
it is sunny
so why worry

but the abiding fear
consuming
even here
in the sunshine
i think of poison

4 comments:

  1. Philly, right?

    Seriously, though...wow

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  2. pretty funny.
    but no, never lived in philly.
    and the few times that i visited never made me desire to either.
    thanks for the comment.

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  3. Love the imagery. Heavy-duty. Glad to see you're still doing the poetry thing.

    IB

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  4. ib - thanks. i think i need to do it more often.

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